Free To Be Me: White Skinny Jeans
This has been entered into the Free To Be Me competition... and won!
As I was walking down the street wearing white skinny jeans,
I received a nasty look from a scary bunch of teens.
But it might have been the cardigan that made them stop and stare,
Or maybe it’s the bright blue top or yellow shoes I wear.
Either way I carried on, looking straight ahead,
With earphones pumping Lady Gaga right into my head.
As I walked on, I started to sing the words aloud,
Something which made many people’s heads turn right around.
I carried on along the street, the kids started to glance
Over at my yellow shoes, as they began to dance.
A Quickstep song’s hard to resist, so why keep it inside?
Or Tango, Cha-cha, Foxtrot too. I really love to Jive!
I finally approached my house and opened up the door,
I strolled into the kitchen floor and as I did I saw
My brother at the breakfast bar, his face so very grim.
He said “When are you gonna give that mop of hair a trim?”
“I like my hair the way it is” came back his question’s answer.
“I also like to sing out loud, I’d love to be a dancer.
I love the clothes that I put on; they make me feel free
To be anything at all, but mostly to be me!”
7 Comments – Postiwch sylw
Stormer007
Rhoddwyd sylw 20 mis yn ôl - 29th September 2010 - 16:15pm
Sorr, the picture of the Cardigan is a bit fuzzy :/
CLICryan
Rhoddwyd sylw 20 mis yn ôl - 30th September 2010 - 11:12am
Good for you - be yourself, always.
Stormer007
Rhoddwyd sylw 20 mis yn ôl - 30th September 2010 - 22:47pm
I plan on it :P Thanks :)
Sambow
Rhoddwyd sylw 18 mis yn ôl - 5th November 2010 - 16:44pm
This is awesome, reading it aloud and it works briliantly as a rap XD That may not be what you were going for but nonetheless its got great rhymes- and I actualy like your fashion sense :)
Tansi
Rhoddwyd sylw 17 mis yn ôl - 11th December 2010 - 19:55pm
thats a totally awesome piece of writing, im sorry i didnt read it earlier. and i agree with Sambow with her comment too. congrats on winning the Let Me Be Free competition.
Stormer007
Rhoddwyd sylw 17 mis yn ôl - 12th December 2010 - 01:24am
Oh thank you so much :) It's nice ot have feedback on work. And thanks for the congratulations :) I was kinda shocked when I found out :P
Stormer007
Rhoddwyd sylw 17 mis yn ôl - 19th December 2010 - 00:12am
I just wanted to say, I really like that the note at the beginning of this was changed haha, It's really cool, thanks.